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Review of Watchful Starman  
Review by Oracle69
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
It is lovely poem. The starman is akin to a guiding angel


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Review of eclipse  
Review by Oracle69
Rated: E | (3.5)
Lovely! The eclipse has explained by the writer to his dog keeps me thinking. What a way to define eclipse? Children would love it.

The use of first person singular and the third person singular can be a bit confusing. But going into the story and living the story shows it is a narrative.


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Review of Uselessness  
Review by Oracle69
Rated: E | (4.0)
Adelaide epitomized human being. We love to give reasons to whatever we are doing.
Anyway we are rational being. Reason for everything gives our life meaning.

The part where Adelaide said: “I’ll learn damn well what I want, and damn the consequences.” is my favourites part.

That is freedom! That is honesty!


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