This is a real feel-good poem. I love the style and the rhyming pattern works well. Under normal circumstances, the poem may be considered a little short, but you've certainly captured the imagery of summer, so well that the poem doesn't need to be any longer. The way you've included the 5 senses adds that little bit of realism to the poem, making the reader able to imagine the scene. A brilliant poem. I just need the weather to go with it where I live! :)
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