haha I loved this poem! Throughout, I found myself agreeing. It's difficult to get in the Christmas spirit in a warm, rainy climate when you're used to snow and cozy fires. I could easily relate even though I live in a place that usually has an abundance of snow this time of year. The past few years have been very mild.
I especially liked your ending, which took me by surprise - a pleasant surprise. Nice writing style, and I didn't notice any errors. Great job!
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