This was a very moving short story for me. It brought real tears to my eyes in a few places and not many things do that to me. The only part I found a bit confusing was that Emma thought Mack and Charlie were father and son, but they didn't seem to be in any other part of the story. Other than that, I thought it was very well written.
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