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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Well it left me thinking. I'm still unsure of the ending. It came so sudden without any time spent in the water. But overall a good story.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very creative. I could have fun with that for hours. The story line was also well thought out.
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