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Review by Alan Davies
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thought filled and interesting.
Just a quick note; you've missed some capitalization with your I's
Keep expressing yourself busybutterfly!

Regards,
Alan Davies
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Review by Alan Davies
Rated: E | (5.0)
100 tickets please! Happy Birthday!!

Alan Davies
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Review of City Streets  
Review by Alan Davies
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Jaye,
How many times have we seen "street people" and made assumptions? Some garner sympathy instantly; woman and children, even men with some hopeful looking bedraggled dog beside them. Often though we try and dodge them; lest we smell urine, or they might try and grab us. They got there because of drugs or alcohol, we may assume, Your story let me see this woman in a way I could not have imagined; a fallen executive. Great job.
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