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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
I found this writer's portrayal of the character of Sherry to be intriguing in its realistic description. The dialogue wasn't forced and flowed between characters smoothly. I liked the way Sherry is portrayed as a confident, self-assured, woman. I enjoyed the way the writer made her main character have spunk and sass when she spoke. I was drawn into the world of Sherry and loved how she was vigilant in the way she created words and validated them with a stubborn firmness. I would have liked to read more of the back story behind Sherry and her position at The Man Pit. The writer shows a slight departure of self confidence in the main character when she thinks of her job. Building on this aspect would enhance this great story even more so! Regardless this story is easy for readers to identify with and the writer does an excellent job throwing in small tidbits of information to wet the reader's appetite for more!
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