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Review by Kit
Rated: E | (4.5)
The Good

This is very interesting and useful. I'm glad you made something like this that I think a lot of people can benefit from.

The Bad

There's just some awkward grammar issues.

Suggestions/Corrections

I'm not going to address every grammar issue but I think you'll get the gist.

Activities that are usually carried out outside the home to relieve fatigue must also be stopped and it is recommended to do #stayathome.

The 'do' isn't necessary and makes the phrasing a bit awkward.

about a new virus affecting the economy, education, society and an unexpected future.

I think something like this would work better: about a new virus' effect on the economy, education, and society, as well as a now unpredictable future.

Overall

This is a very useful tool. It could use some touch up with sentence structure and grammar issues but other than that I really liked it.

Keep Writing!!!
Kit


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