I rarely review poetry, because I am inept at it. However, the smile that this piece placed upon my face forced be to do so. As you can see, I thoroughly enjoyed this. It is refreshingly light-hearted. You capture the author's frustration with getting the right words on the page. How natural it is to transfer our iadequacies to the little machine.
"Until it seems the mistakes are mine, Not yours."
That is a beautiful line, among many. Well, anyway, that is how I feel. What follows is Dan's Simple Method For Reviewing Poetry (Remember, I already told you that I am inept).
Does it rhyme? Although, in my world, poetry must rhyme; this does not. But it has rhythm. That's good enough for me this time.
Does it make sense? It makes perfect sense. In fact, I wish I had said it.
Do I like it? Oh yes, I like it very much.
Thank you for writing this simple little piece, Lobelia.