I really, really enjoyed this poem. The title really caught my attention. The beggining was very good. I was almost trapped in the dream along with the woman, as a by-stander! I was, however, thrown off when you wrote " I could actually almost feel him hugging me to him." This got me out of contact with the poem. But, altogether, this is a well crafted and creative poem .
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