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Review by poppinoffalot Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)
This is 99% perfect. Minus the use of the word ass. The word goes against the sweet, frienldy style of the writing. The way it is written macks everything sound peaceful and nice. Keep with that theme.
You seem to be able to get inside the mans mind and express what he is feeling.
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Review of Dirt  
Review by poppinoffalot Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I still can feel him on me,
and in me, and trying to pull off my jeans.
I am the king of writing out of order so...but if I read it write...the jeans come off before the in me part.
Very easy to feel in your shoes.
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Review by poppinoffalot Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I like the line The Beautiful Letdown.
I am not exactly sure what its about though.
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Review of I am sorry  
Review by poppinoffalot Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)
I life the repeatative style of this one. Your husband must be very understanding.
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Review of nightly ritual  
Review by poppinoffalot Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Are your poems about real life events?
Yo write very clearly. It is easy to feel you laying in your bed.
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