You know you have a talent. I sense the emotion in the poem. I enjoyed it very much. For me it has no flaws. Enhance your talent. You are great at capturing the moment, the feeling. Always remember that in this world, there is never anything that you cannot work on to improve. Continue writing and sharpening your skills.
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!
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