Words cannot describe the sheer beauty in all of this. A sister becoming a mother to her nephew because his mother got killed in a nightclub is a truly great story idea. Her willingness to look after her nephew-her child now-is easily a grand idea. I also like the fact that the new mother's name is never mentioned, yet her older sister's is.
Honestly? I'd like to see some more room for written by authors. It's already hard when you're someone who basically lives every two paycheques (or paycheck in the USA) to every two paycheques. It's even harder when you're asked to donate to WDC to keep it running. Apart from that, interactive stories being available for anyone to write, or even to post. Admittedly, I only joined WDC to post chapters for the interactive stories I liked.
But the fact that I can't post one does annoy me a bit.
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