I quite like this... Even though it did seem kind of rushed. It was pretty cool to read! Short, sweet, not really simple, but quite good. Anyway, I was just wondering; are those people actually dead or what? I'm sure you've been asked that question before but I still would like to know. Thanks for listening!
Love the "restraining order" line. :) Made me smile! It's not a bad poem at all. Keep going and I'll bet you'll find you're a lot better than you think you are! :P Hope to read some more poems from you soon!
I REALLY liked this book! It's interesting so far! The only problem I have is the cussing, but that's just my personal view of that. Anyway, I LOVE how you included Athena in there. I LOVE her as a Greek godess and it made me smile when I read that. Thanks for the interesting read! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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