I like it! It is really original and different. It is not a slasher and I like the piece for that. The dialogue is a pleasure to read. The best part is when the dragon name the human "Fluffy". I could not resist having a big grinning smile. This had made my day!
It is a pretty optimistic poetic piece. It is short and to the point. In this case, it is great to be a short piece. It doesn't dwell on the negative. It is better than what I could come up. It seems my mind is more on the dark side on that matter. Thanks for showing the bright side!
I like the picture. There is a impression of magic in the air. I just find a bit strange the way Alice have her back. It is a bit too much arched to my taste, as if she have a anomaly on her back. Beside that, it is a great work! I like the thorny "branchs" on top of the picture. It is a nice blend of bright and dark.
This is different of what I could have read on death. I like the idea of portal. It is original. I have heard other similar things but it was different. I like the text ending with a question. I put the thinking a bit further, on a personal basis. Death and the after life are personal. The question put my thinking on the more pivotal moment between life and death. I usually don't think about that.
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