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Review of Unnamed  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really like this, for her memories to come back and haunt her in the form of a little boy. I felt like at some parts she might have already had one and forgot? There were things that maybe need expanded like, what use to be in the closet? It sounded like there had been a trauma in it.
The only thing that I really didn’t understand was the parentheses. I didn’t know if it was the narrator talking or the women’s thoughts or reality being unveiled. But this story has a lot of potential to be haunting. Really if you wanted to spend the time on it, it could be quite long; the concept will pull readers in. I think you got something worth working on.
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Review of The Wardrobe  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
whoa! Nice ending i like it!
Review of Conquistador  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow!!!! I LOVE it!!!! its so magical and different like a poem with a rel story and plot line. You should write more and then let me know so i can read it to!!!!!! I don't have anything to say on how to make it better or to change. It's Perfect.
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