An intriguing poem indeed! I love the dark, slightly eerie language. This poem reminds me of poets like William Blake; you have a turn of phrase that lends itself perfectly to that style.
Wow...the imagery in this poem is so powerful and beautiful. The rhyme is soft enough so that it doesn't distract from the other elements, but it does create a rhythm that makes the poem easy to read.
Great work!!
AC
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