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Review of Somewhere  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the words. The feeling is there; I can see the message.
Please accept this constructively, only because it has an effect on the flow.
Hyphens are more for joining words; semicolons may work better. Maybe even break the sentences into new lines. It's good stuff. Just a little finesse to give such an amazing poem just a little bit more. Thank you for sharing, I appreciate your words.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, these are all honest questions; I appreciate your vulnerability. This is why we write.
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Review of Drowned Out  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Really good, it resonates with me.
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Review of Bigger Than I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This hit me right in the feels. I struggle with my weight and I am very self conscious. I am very hard on myself. I crack jokes that I hide behind. I needed this.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very introspective. Very powerful emotions in these words.
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Review of "I Am"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That was very clever, well done!
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Review of Metis Saved Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing imagery, gritty and powerful.
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