This piece sounds like a fresh beginning of a strong relationship. I love how it signifies how nature plays a big role in the meeting of two souls, loved the read!
This piece is an absolute delight to your mind and your heart. It shows how much you cared for the person. It somehow makes me feel, that you're a very strong person to jot down your raw feelings
Hey djinn, I found this plot interesting and could picture the twists. I could relate to it. I also think your choice of words resonate with me and it is captivating from a fiction perspective. Overall, I enjoyed reading the piece and I would only suggest being more descriptive about the surroundings and explanatory about the scene and nuances to add an extra flavor to it.
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