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72 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
*I do know and understand that when we are working sometimes these minor issues will pop up. I will take this into consideration* I am a casual reviewer. I will mention minor grammar mistakes and spelling errors. I try to be fair and to encourage you. I will let you know what I thought of the piece and will take in consideration if it is of a personal nature. I can not wait to see what you have written!
I'm good at...
Giving my honest opinion of what I have read, spotting spelling and minor grammar issues.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, horror, thriller, mystery just to name a few.
Least Favorite Genres
I am not real fond of sci-fi and poems but I will read them and give me feedback. Also political items I am not fond of either.
I will not review...
I will not review anything that involves rape, incest, animal cruelty abuse.
Public Reviews
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Review of The Jester  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was great, at first I thought it was not going to have the happy ending the jester wanted but he got it.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Solve: Paid 5,000 Breakfast at Tiffanies
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review of Greenwillow Pass  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thats so sad but a good reason why you dont text and drive. I loved it the only thing you might get hit up for is the text messages with some of them not being capitalized. But I know we text like that so they may let it slide.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I would love to read more! That was awesome. I felt like I was there walking with Ebron and the other characters. It's not often when reading you see whats happening like a movie in your head. The chapters I read were well written. There was nothing that jumped out at me that said you need to note this down just minor things. Such as using and a lot which I am guilty of doing. As I read further I hoped that things would move forward between Elena and Ebron. I loved how you prolonged it with the two of them. That makes it all more fun to find out whether they get together or not. Great job, don't ever give up!
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Review of Unique Love  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved it. Very well done. I would not change a thing.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! Great story. Its hard to make a choice like that but with her being an elf the years will fly by in no time. I did notice a few spelling errors along the way but nothing major. Great job!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved it! I wouldn't change a thing.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
For one of your earlier pieces this is pretty good :) Sad ending to the chapter but I loved it!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story I would love to read more! Here are just a few things I noticed. (Looking around the room she seen (I would have used the word saw) what one would normally see in a hospital room.) comit Commit* Other than a few grammar issues great story. I would love to read more. One thing I have started using that helps find little mistakes is Grammarly. They have a free version that catches mistakes and offers suggestions on fixes for them I would love to know what happens to her!
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Review of DADDY MINE  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written. It is not easy when you lose a loved one. They said time can help with the pain but never now and then a memory sneaks up when we are not looking.
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Review of Author bio  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it! Normally author bios can be boring but you made your fun and made me smile as I read it. Well done!
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written, It almost sounds like you are describing a night terror. Unable to wake up let alone scream so someone can wake you and pull you from your torment.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it! Today so many girls are being sent home for such things. I know it's not often it happens to guys but it is nice to see this out in the light. Very well written.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh wow! Was not the ending I was expecting! Very well written, it made me want to read more. Looks like grandma has a nack for these things.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done! I was able to read this with great ease. The words flowed well and I did not have to stop and re-read anything. It made me wish I was there and could follow the fox.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it J! When I logged on and checked my feed I saw this and dropped everything to read it. This was very well done. There were only two things that seemed off but other than that it was awesome. They looked like spelling or slight grammar issues. "They had found the girl clutching a knife in front of her chest at 9:30 PM (on.)" "Hobbs thought to himself, shaking his head at the mess (that's) sat before him." Other than those two that I saw I loved it and would love to find out what happens next!
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Red Trainer
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very interesting last entry. I did enjoy the story entries. The ones that I have a 4.5 on were for minor things such a grammar. I did love it and would love to know what happened to the hangman's daughter.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "The All Flame
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good question :)
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Forgotten Time
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, I was not expecting to see a prompt.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Azure Dreamer
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Lucky girl. Not easy to find a four-leaf clover.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Forgotten Courage
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I hope she is able to find that courage to do what is needed.
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