While I am sorry for loss, you are right life remains for most of us. Luckly you have your family members to help each other though the grieving times.
I felt this was well written and easy to follow. I got exactly where you were in term of dealing with this horrific event.
Wow! That was powerful and boy could I relate to this poem right from the start. I felt the pain and anguish rocket off the page and infiltrate my emotions.
I would say you nailed it!
I could not tell if the victim was beaten, neglected, suicidal, but I felt the abuse and misery on any account.
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