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Review of Next To Me  
Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: E | (3.0)
that was beautiful. You are very talented.

Taz
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Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
That was a very honest opinion in deed.

While I am sorry for loss, you are right life remains for most of us. Luckly you have your family members to help each other though the grieving times.

I felt this was well written and easy to follow. I got exactly where you were in term of dealing with this horrific event.

Taz
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Review of Porcelain  
Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Wow! That was powerful and boy could I relate to this poem right from the start. I felt the pain and anguish rocket off the page and infiltrate my emotions.

I would say you nailed it!

I could not tell if the victim was beaten, neglected, suicidal, but I felt the abuse and misery on any account.

Taz
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Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: E | (1.5)
Well, I really like it until the last phase. I'm not sure if it a lack of meaning to me or the way it flows. I have read it 3x and not quit put my finger on what it is.

It all seems to flow so smoothly and easily developing a picture for me and than the last phase just hit me like the gravel edge of a freshly paved road.

Sorry, I know that doesn't really offer much help. Like I said I read it, re-read it stepped back and read it again; no insight to why it hits me that way but the best I was able to narrow it to was the last 3 lines.

Taz
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Review of No More Games  
Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
wow, it was short with no setting, no intro or follow up just dialog and yet I finished with an understanding of both characters emotional mind set.

very intriguing. I would love to know if they is more... Is it your own or a blurp you barrowed from something?

Thank you for chance to read it.

Taz

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Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
I did enjoy reading this. It fact was the oppsite of what I believe and yet is not that far different.

A good read in deed.

Taz
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Review of "Q"  
Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: E | (1.0)
not what I expenting, but interest none the less.

You know we could just replace Q with Kw? Just saying.

Nicely written poem none the less

Taz
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Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: E | (1.0)
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Thank you for considering my application for residency in your fine town.

Taz
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Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: E | (1.0)
so confused, I have gotten other raffle tickets yet not sure what they are or how to use them. Please help the newbie.

Taz
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Review of Noticing Newbies  
Review by Taz_Koby
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Thank you for all the support I have already gotten from everyone. It is nice to acknowledged so quickly.
Write on!
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