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Review of The God Thing  
Review by Chanon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I laughed all the way through your piece. I think you have a gift for creating humour from serious stuff. I think you could separate this piece into two items—one about the creation of the world, animals and the funny things about that. Make the other one about young people’s relationships. It is very healing to be able to write about the emotional things young people go through and to make it funny is truly a gift. Keep up the good work.
Just a comment from a granny!
RoseS
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