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Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, good sense of emotion.
Possibly change wording from 'nope' if you want to have more of professionalism?
Thanks for sharing!
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Review of Space Ball  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A great read; entertaining too!
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Review of Chaos  
Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great description of what can often be a chaotic celebratory meal!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting perspective. Enjoyed your rhyme scheme and imagery.
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Review of Hole in the wall  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Intriguing! Can sense the mystery in the words and appreciated your rhyme scheme.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A very interesting perspective! Thanks for writing.
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (4.0)
Simple and brilliant!
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Review of Jesus saves  
Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (4.0)
A great encouragement. I did think the last line interrupted the flow-maybe change the wording from 'whys'. Otherwise, good poem!
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I appreciate the raw emotion in your words, the imagery and the realism in your writing. Thankyou for sharing words from the heart.
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (4.5)
I must say I've never thought of tea in this light...love your specifications.
Now I want some tea...
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sounds a bit ominous, but well written
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting piece! I like that it begins with feelings of hopelessness but then turns hopeful at the end.
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Review by Roberts89
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well that was a twist! A small, good read. I enjoyed it.
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