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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi DragonBlue,

I came across this deep and wonderful poem of yours.
You have a brilliant way of writing and describing events or surroundings.

As I'm reading through, it seems like describing the mixture of order and chaos.
Words are also free-flowing as if there's something to discover.
This poem might sound interesting and diverse as well.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bubblegum,

Very interesting piece about what's happening during the Halloween season.
You've described those details in a way that I felt belonged with those witches flying around.
Great article, it's a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing your thoughts that brought back memories about this season.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Memorable Days  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi jaya,

This poem is great and clever. I love the creativity and the flow,
as well as how organized this is. School days bring nostalgia.
Some memories are quite remarkable.

I hope you keep on writing.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose


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Review of Haiku again  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kotaro,

This is a wise and inspiring haiku.
Thank you for sharing this.

I hope you stay blessed in your life and journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jon,

Welcome to this writing community!

I believe that you're a great writer because in this post you've indicated renewing your passion. There's also a meaningful thought at the end of your post, "Is that a new leaf I see?"

It looks like you're looking forward to an awesome journey.
Great post, I hope you keep on writing.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose



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Review of Hell  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aaamangos,

You've written a clever poem about where hell is in this world.

The hell you described is the one that exists in our minds or here on earth.
But there is a possibility that hell might exist even after we die.
Your poem is an eye-opener that might summon awareness of the mind.

It is also advised to have a positive outlook on life, even though it's not that easy.
Great work and I hope you stay blessed in your writing journey.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose


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Review of Mayfly  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

Thank you for sharing the idea of the Mayfly.
Once fluttering in sunlight then slowly vanishing until nowhere to be found.
There's something mysterious within those lines. Great work that might spark curiosity.

I hope you keep on writing.
Wishing you all the best!
Rose


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Review of I’m sorry  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Great and some of the parts are relatable.
But this looks sad and at the same time, hoping for the person to heal and find peace.
The person might be in a dark place or place where the light is difficult to find.
I'm hoping that the person would regain the strength for life again.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose


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Review of Life Thus  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Burning Boat,

Your thoughts seem to be meaningful.

You have a great subtitle (which could explain the meaning of the content),
a clever poem, with depth. Even your alias, Burning Boat- seems to have some type of story beneath words. Life is a journey indeed.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose



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Review of Self Talk  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Gray,

This is somehow relatable. There are moments in which we talk with ourselves.
Our thoughts and words spiral through the air. And even Einstein talked to himself.
Sometimes, we find great ideas upon talking with ourselves as well.

I find this interesting.
Keep writing.

Wishing you all the best!
Rose


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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi R.W.

Welcome to this writing community. Your poem seems relatable because when I look at the sky, various thoughts would visit my mind. Something great, colorful, tragic, happy, and just everything that imagination could bring. It's like composing a story in your mind.

Great work, I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Vanity Fair  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I love the concept of your poem. You took me on a tour of colors, life, and creativity.
Great work, I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Rosebuds  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

This is a clever and lovely poem. It can describe patience in one's journey.
Glorifying God and asking for his guidance is such an inspiration.
Great work and I hope you keep on writing.

Wishing you all the best in your life and writing journey!
Rose



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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Soma,

This is clever and relatable.
I hope you could be somewhere where you truly wanted to be.
There were times that unnecessary thoughts would haunt me as well.
I'm learning to be at the present.
Let's keep writing.

Wishing you all the best in your life and writing journey.
Rose



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Review of Snow  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aaamangos,

This poem seems clever, sad yet beautiful.
But the snow seems to be very cold yet you've given this meaning and substance.
Great thoughts, I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Saturday mornings  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Akkeri,

This poem seems to be substantial and meaningful. You still mentioned the sunlight on the near end, which could bring some hope.

"Yet no light shines without shadow"

The line stated above in which you've written completed this piece so well.
It's like yin and yang. Sometimes, we tend to dwell in our shadows alone and later recognize the light within us.

Overall, great work.
I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose





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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Strangely,

This poem is clever and unique. The question seems to be interesting. But it got more interesting when I read those words in your poem. There might be countless possibilities in this universe that could spark curiosities in our minds. Also, the moon can be a source of inspiration. I might want to write about the moon as well.

Overall, great work.
I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of You  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ravin,

I think I would agree with this poem.
It is clever, helpful and your wisdom is being shared.
A lot of people should read this, and I am grateful that I have read your poem.

Most of all, this seems relatable.
You're a great writer and I hope you keep on writing.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of shy  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ravin,

The title and the subtitle, seem aligned which makes the poem looks interesting. I guess this seems to spread awareness as well.

Sometimes, the universe works in mysterious ways.
In ways, we realize that we may not be always in control.
We just get surprised about some changes in our lives.
There is also a chance to improve.

Great work, I wish the universe will bless you in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Brave New World  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi IE,

This is brilliant. Your poem depicts being loved even though being born in this world. Thank you for this reminder that readers can treasure in their hearts. This is also an inspiring piece. Overall, great work. Keep writing and I hope you stay blessed in life as well.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Eyes  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

This poem of yours is inspiring and alluring. Love seems like a wonderful yet challenging world. The writer described it well in an understandable manner. In this poem, it seems that love will win, as loyalty is being emphasized. There are some beautiful lines that can capture the heart of the readers as well, like this one:

"I will be strong for us
And focus on all that’s right"

Overall, great work for sharing your thoughts on what true love looks like.
I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose



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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi K.Biays,

This poem is brilliant because you choose to dive into the light of the Lord.
He might even appreciate your kind and inspiring poem. Overall, great work for being courageous in sharing your thoughts. The road ain't easy in life, but your prayers will surely help to heal. I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose.



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Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tinotenda,

This is a relatable piece of yours. I'm also an introvert and most likely, I do enjoy being alone in solitude with not much noise. Although, I did attend some formal parties before, only on occasion. I do appreciate your explanations on living an introverted life. This will make us understand more of the struggles as well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this matter because it really means a lot! Great work and I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best wishes!
Rose


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Review of Take Flight  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Eleanor,

I love your clever thoughts on this prose. The way you describe the clouds and the skies is truly amazing. The flow of your words could give the readers, some type of creative inspiration.
Great work! Keep writing and I hope you stay blessed in your life and writing journey.

All the best Wishes!
Rose



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Review of Interloper  
Review by Rose Lee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Zeke,

This seems interesting and meaningful, especially when you stated:

"Even beauty must be gone,
If it does not fit."

I also adore the lines from the very beginning, great and clever descriptions.
Looking forward to your poems.

All the best wishes to your writing journey,
Rose


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