What a cute little story. Leads me to wonder the before and the after of the story. Those are the signs I look for; what tells me the writing is good. It keeps me wondering.
There was a word or two left out; and a spelling error. (rocked instead of rock) I get excited at my own writings sometimes and write in my head faster than I actually type. A reminder to myself to always read through the story before final submission. Good Job!
What a sweet story of sisters sharing and caring. Reminds me of my sister and how close we were growing up and even closer now as adults. I enjoyed the story. It provided good descriptions of the dress, the small accessories collected over time to complete the costume and the music box. I may have chosen a more child-favorite cereal than Honey Nut Cheerios and I may have thrown in a comma or two if not a new sentence in some areas. Overall I like the story very well.
This little ditty definitely meets the contest guidelines. It reminded me of the shenanigans that others were involved in when I was twelve. Of course, I would never have participated in such. The name, Mr. Cobb, makes me think his class would be difficult. He probably takes a lot of kidding and dishes out lots of homework assignments. And, for a twelve year old, the baseball diamond looks much better than doing homework. Good Job!
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