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Review of Autumn  
Review by Yani Yanovitch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
I do think that this is a excellent story but i just wanted to say that maybe in parts more towards the beginning where you were describeing yourself and her you had just a little to much description im not trying to be harsh just trying to give some constructive critisism feel free to do the same with me!
Yani Yanovitch
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