|WOW. This is the kind of work that has special meaning to each person that reads it. I don't know your goal, but I know what I took from it and it made me incredibly emotional.
I like how it can have a different message to each individual, you never force what it is, you allow the reader to apply it to what they need it to be. For me, it was depression and how it runs riot over me.
I truly have no criticisms, I hope among your many hobbies you have included working toward publishing your work. I've read several entries of yours from the books, which aren't my typical genre, to your short stories and then this. I didn't feel comfortable writing a review of anything else I've read up to this point because it is out of my comfort zone, but this spoke to me. The name drew me in and I was taken. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
You are incredibly talented!