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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
EvilDawg,
You had a great introduction. It instantly got me wondering why those people were there. I found very interesting how 'you' were knocked overboard by shrapnel from a cannon fire. This, i think, shows the time period in which your scene takes place. You had great description, your work raised questions that makes the reader think.
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