Like the other two chapters, incredible. Haven't read anything this good in a while. Love all the shifters, not to mention the crew of the Beetle. Are Dallas and Fairy the same person? It's a little unclear. Wish I'd had the idea, I might have to do a fanfic off of it!
All I can say is...wow. That was incredible. The setting, the choice of characters, the world you created--everything was amazing. You don't often get stories in which immortality's a curse, but I think it's absolutely true. I'm so happy to finally find a tough female character who isn't perfect and beautiful and basically an ornament. Can't wait to read more!!!
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