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Review of Bloomsday  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
It's great to see a giantess story that's actually legible. Far too often do I see authors who can't even understand how to use capitalization and periods, let alone italics and commas. Evie is a little bland as a character, but given that the longest story branch is only seven chapters at this point, that's understandable, and I'm willing to wager it'll be remedied as time goes on. I'm quite interested in seeing how the venus fly-trap storyline continues on, and hope to see Evie grow beyond comprehension. Keep up the good work.

Ad infinitum!
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very useful and informative writeup that can apply to just about any rating system, not merely the one implemented here. Far too often do people treat 7.0/10 as "average", and think that 5.0/10 is "poor".

I should, however, mention that you mad a small mistake in capitalizing a letter which should be in lowercase:

"You're Done! It's perfect! Move on!"
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