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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Evil Dawg,

I liked the premise of the journey. I would have liked you to elaborate more on how the different characters arrived there and what being stranded on the island was like. Throwing Samantha in there as a kind of antagonist was a nice addition. Some more description of both of the islands would have been nice as well. But all in all I enjoyed the piece of work you put together.

Michael Candlish
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