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Review of 2nd place  
Review by Serendipity Rue
Rated: E | (5.0)
You somehow put into words what I've been trying to say for so long. Beautiful
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Review by Serendipity Rue
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow! I loved it, such an engaging story. I was hooked and the ending was nothing like what I expected. Maybe just check your spelling of Azazel as I think you spelled it a few different ways throughout the story.
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Review of Picnic  
Review by Serendipity Rue
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! I felt their disgust at the cooking. Beautiful emotive language, it seems a little disjointed, but apart from that it's an incredible story.
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Review by Serendipity Rue
Rated: E | (4.0)
Loved the poem, just wanted to point out that in the second to last line you might have accidentally spelled wrath as wraith. Please keep writing as you have a beautiful way with words.
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Review of The game.  
Review by Serendipity Rue
Rated: E | (4.5)
LOL! I love the way this is written. You had me hooked by the first sentence. Please keep writing, you make me laugh. I would have loved if it was longer but that's probably just a personal thing.
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