cool story!!! its nice of you to have written so superbly from such a different angle. the genre is also uncommon...actually i was looking around for some really uncommon stuff and this one sounded interesting.
i would have liked it even more if the story was longer...and the epilouge does not as much depth as the previous part.
nice read...thanks! write on and all the best
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