| I happen to believe by this that you are not a Christan. You say there is no proof of God, but the proof is everywhere ! In every person, thing, animal, and personality! I dont mean to preach to you, but i dont want to see you in hell. I hate to break it to you but that's where you will be if you don't believe in God.
I think the technical writing is good, that's what i rated you on, not the actual story line!
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