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Review of TODAY  Open in new Window.
Review by rose_dew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WELL DONE.REALLY A POEM WITH REALITY.....
KEEP WRITING
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Review by rose_dew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your poetry is very fabulous and with your touch of creativity it has become a flawless piece.
keep writing
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Review of Daddy  Open in new Window.
Review by rose_dew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there
It is really a master piece and I would like to tell you that the theme and the thoughts of your poem are really marvellous.I really feel that you will be a great writer one day.Your parents will be proud of you.
Good luck to you
keep writing
kriti
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Review of My Love for You  Open in new Window.
Review by rose_dew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Really very impressive work.
keep it up
kriti
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Review of Poem about Poetry  Open in new Window.
Review by rose_dew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi there..
I read your poetry and really found it very interesting.
But I think if you modify it a bit,it will be much more appealing.This poetry of yours lacks a proper flow or you can say a proper sequence.
you have written that
"This is a poem about poetry".
Try to expose this line.This poem is basically a wrapron of the nature and the line"this is a poem about poetry"is not meeting the flow of the rhythem of this poem.Try to expand this line.
Rest everything is up to mark.
I hope you wont mind my suggestion.
keep writing
good luck
kriti
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