|For some reason this, as a whole, did not speak to me like I thought it would. It has everything I love. The vocabulary, the sentence structure, the structure of the poem as a whole...all of these things are very enjoyable to me. The second part that ends in "A grace remains forever mine"... that part really speaks to me.
I found the visual language in this poem to be really great. I had no problem envisioning many of these things in a very abstract way which is definitely the way I work.
All in all I enjoyed this poem and reread it quite a few times.