Great story! i enjoyed it very much. i was completely freaked out by the monster. I love how you built the tension and the reveal of the monster. I wish your ending was more solid. I was a little confused by it. at fisrt i thought she was going crazy but then I wasn't sure. I thought she was becoming a monster too. Just not too sure what happened at the end.
I thought that this story started off a little slow but got way better by the end. I think you need to explain that this is happening in the future more. i triple taked your WWIII comments a few times to make sure I was reading the with digits. Would love to know what happen to Eon and more of his back story. also would like to see maberick get his revenge.
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