Hey! I love this poem you have on here, and appreciate you posting it for all the world to read and critic. I like how you are straight forward to the point. You description and specified emotions really give you the experience.. And if you've felt like this before, it makes you nostalgic, longing to float back to the past. Thank you for taking the time to read this and take this review to heart!
~Peace and Blessings
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