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Favorite Genres
Fantasy (whether light and fluffy high fantasy, or dark and gritty low fantasy; I can get into either), sci-fi, adventure, talking animals stories
Least Favorite Genres
It's extremely rare for me to enjoy any work that lacks any sort of fantastical or actiony elements
Favorite Item Types
Any work of fiction (books, chapters, short stories, etc.)
Least Favorite Item Types
Poetry. I read next to no poetry normally, and I know very little about the art of poetry
I will not review...
Erotica. I don't mind a work having sex scenes, but I don't want to read anything that's chiefly ABOUT the sex.
Public Reviews
Review by Soran
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was really well-written and compelling start. It doesn't give a whole lot of information about the setting all at once, but it gives just enough to get me interested in going further, which is exactly what a good prologue should do. I see you have more chapters written to this, so I'll definitely be reading more to see where this goes. One of the only real flaws I was able to catch was a simple grammar error, in this sentence:

'One of the grabbed the scythe away from him and hit him on the head while the other one knifed him from behind.'

I assume "One of the grabbed" was meant to be either "One of them grabbed" or "One of the men/bandits/etc grabbed"?
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