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Review of Blessings  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I know this is a short and relatively simple piece, but I can picture a very vivid image reading it. It’s a beautiful image, and that’s difficult to do with few words.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
You’ve got some genuinely cool imagery in here. I can certainly feel a sense of general emotion and anger woven through this. You’ve got some lines I think are great: “sword turned to shooting screams”, and some I feel are a little clumsy: “white lighted, that bited our look holes”.

Overall though, it was a really interesting read.
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Review of Another round  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Honestly, I feel like I’ve had this exact same birthday. Until the fourth round… I’ve had problems with alcohol in my life, so there’s something that feels almost wistful and innocent about old experiences like this. Enjoyed it, thanks.
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