I wanted to stop by and leave a review
My overall impression:
What I liked: 1 This poem seem to speak to me,as I have gotten older it seems that life just flies by.
2 The words had a good flow.
I enjoy reading good poetry.Please keep writing
I liked this poem very much.I felt as if I was the child snicking down to take a peep.The wonder of Christmas is so often lost in all the hustle and bustle.Your poem reminded me of a more simple time, as a child wanting to be there when Santa arrived .The true joy of Christmas is through a child's eyes.Your poem reflected this.