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Review by pamela still
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found your poem while looking through the read a Newbie section of WDC.
My overall impression:This was a well written and thought out poem.


What I liked:

1 Theme:I really liked the theme you chose for your poem

2.Flow:The words you chose have a good flow to them and your poem kept me wanting to read.

I enjoy reading good poetry,and look forward to reading more.

Please keep writing
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Review by pamela still
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I wanted to stop by and leave a review
My overall impression:
What I liked: 1 This poem seem to speak to me,as I have gotten older it seems that life just flies by.
2 The words had a good flow.
I enjoy reading good poetry.Please keep writing
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Review of Winter Wonderland  
Review by pamela still
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked your poem.I felt has if I was out in the snow walking my dog..The flow of words were good.

Keep writing
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Review of Mom's Pancakes  
Review by pamela still
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I really enjoyed your poem.It had me thinking of my mom in the kitchen.
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Review of Christmas Night  
Review by pamela still
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked this poem very much.I felt as if I was the child snicking down to take a peep.The wonder of Christmas is so often lost in all the hustle and bustle.Your poem reminded me of a more simple time, as a child wanting to be there when Santa arrived .The true joy of Christmas is through a child's eyes.Your poem reflected this.
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Review by pamela still
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was such a great help.I loved the way your words flowed,and kept me interested.I wanted to keep reading.
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