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Review by Subiectum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is the perfect example of what would happen when machines would turn against humans. While the artificial intelligent being are being developed, they keep getting more and more dangerous. At the end, they actually became the humans and were about to take over. Very clever and very well written. A good use of the English language and you show to have knowledge of computers. The many enters make it comfortable to read on a screen.
Very nicely done.
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Review by Subiectum
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think this is an amazing story! Ten whole years he can't stop thinking about her. You showed his love for her in a very good way. Also, you were very detailed (portable house phone) which is a nice aspect of the story. The most shocking part is at the end where she wants to "meet" him. Does this mean they never met, or that they want to meet once again? That's for the reader to decide and that is amazing. Very well done!
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