I really like this poem. You have a good way with joining the words together to complete each thought and I like that. Each paragraph builds up nicely to the ending paragraph with the final blow to mankind. It's very inspirational and some of us need to be reminded each day that even through the trials....the bird will sing through it all. Thank you for sharing that.
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