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Review of Too Much Love  
Review by thefirstchandra
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is so so sad. The end brought tears to my eyes. The sad thing is that there are children out there that have to endure that kind of thing. I know, My husband and i addopted our foster children, two boys and after 3 years of being with us they have just now been able to tell us some of the HELL's they had to endure with drug crazed parents. I just had a few questions at the beginning i had to read it about 3 times before i though i could understand what the black and white lump was. Does he see his parents as lumps? Also i dont understand about his mother looking for her slippers with out eyes. Is she blind?
This was such a great story. You are also a "Great" writer as you brought out very sad feelings. Have you ever had anything published?
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Review by thefirstchandra
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I have felt what you have felt, I don't know why God does what he does. I dont even know that much about God because I havn't read the Bible from cover to cover. I know about God from going to church with my Grandmother as a child, going to church at different times in my life and now going to church once in awhile in my 50's. I had a dream, and i have had many dreams in my life that have come true from beginning to end, exactaly as i dreampt them. Lately i have become very interested in our Lord. Recently i saw the movie "The Passion." I cried and cried. I wondered why God would put one he loves through such torment. I have a pinched nerve in my shoulder that when it acts up i have thought i know why people in great pain contemplate killing themselves that is how bad it is. After seeing that movie, I cant look at my pain in the same way. Yes it HURTS BAD, but I can't imagne the Pain Christ went through. I guess i came to the conclusion that God Must love us a lot, and Chris must love us a lot because WE suffer a lot of different pains and if as some churches say God came down in the form of JESUS (because of the trinity) Father, Son, and Holy Spirit are one. Then he came to let us know he has suffered pain also and he just wants us to know that he did this so that our sins will be forgiven. If he did this for us why can't we do as he asks? Do we expect our own children to do right? (what we concive as right) Then we can expect no more from God that he expects us to do right and Jesus came and taught us what RIGHT is before he went throught the great pain of not only Physical pain, but the pain of knowing that we (as his children) did to him. I don't know what the answer is I only know that I have always loved God, Jesus, but i strayed from him when i was younger because i put what I WANTED and not what HE WANTED do do with my life and I suffered the concenquences for that. They say that God has a plan for all of us. I believe this is true. I for some reason I do not know have been showed since I was 18 what my life would be like through dreams that came true. As i got older (and started my third marriage to a man who was more into God and church than I was, and I still fought it.) Within the last year i have a great desire to know and get closer to God. I began to have dreams that I was raising someone eles's children, not my own and not my grandchildren. I could only have one child, so for 10 years that my husband and i were married I wanted to be a foster parent. Finally he said ok he wanted it to. (This was not something I harped on day after day, but only a few times in our 10 years of marriage.) Now we have addoped two boys that were our foster children. Yes I believe Jesus died for us and I have given my life over to him. I still dont know why he does the things he does, but I just don't question it anymore. He must have his reasons.
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