I really enjoyed this piece... it left me wanting more. I particularly liked the "twin knives...of the clock" visual. Over all a great piece interesting and easy to follow. The opening paragraph seemed that it could be a bit more cohesive, but you definitely hit your stride quickly. This is my first review, as I am a "newbie" also, attempting to hit my own stride. I hope it is helpful... Good luck!
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