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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very well writen. I loved this line.

"Polly was a year or so older than me and was concerned about womanhood. I just wanted to be a kid and not work so hard all of the time."

It shows the innocents of a child.

The sad thing is this is happening all over the world.

Thanks and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of WHY AM I A NURSE?  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your way with words. The most compassion I have ever seen is when I looked into the eyes of a Nurse.

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy why could he not have taken that stinking punk over the falls with him. Oh well its your story my man.

Great job, your way with words are always good reading. One line that I liked, well I liked them all but this one was cool.

"The large candle that he kept lit in the corner of his room flickered brightly, buttering the walls with fluid shadows"


Geoff
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Review of Got Milk?  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dave, I don't know if you remember me I was raised on a farm and ended up in the city. This story as all your stuff is very well writen. Thanks, this brought me back to the days of boyhood dreams.

I know this time of year is all about hard work, but if you get a chance take a look at "SUMMER of 55" its in my contest winners folder. You will get a kick out of it.

Geoff
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Review of Screaming Kettles  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very, very good job with this story. There are way too many Joe's that have a need to belong. I felt my chair vibrating as the train beared down on him. The pace was perfect.

Thanks and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Birthright  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good job on this story. I was there standing on the muddy bank and saw the whole thing.

Thanks again and I look forward to reading more of your work.

geoff
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Review of Playing With Fire  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The jail should be full of the ones who up profit before what's right.

Geoff
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Review of Abnormalities  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job like always. Your end seems a bit grim my man. When its my time I will be on a beach with boat drink in hand. Watching warm crystal clear seas waltzing with the sand.

Geoff
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Review of Summer Slumber  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
You did a good job with htis. I found the words to be comforting.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
There is one word for this foolish boy; NARCISSIST.

I liked your way with words and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Habitual Offender  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Life is all a rut. The fun comes on how you dig it.

Geoff
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Review of Song of the Day  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Poetry is as different as the soul who wrote the words.

This line made me dream

"Clouds blowing by with an angel's whisper"

Geoff
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Review of Old Mermaids  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was great.

One of the many lines I enjoyed.

"washed in morning's cool, grey light. Sea mist was marching across the waves, spilling onto the shore,"

I am a Sailor and this piece made me dream. I have a couple of Short stories TALL TALE and HOLE IN THE WALL
that I think you will like.

Thanks again and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Oblivious  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this, you did a great job'

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job, This part I liked your way with words.

"Believe in what we are,
What the USA can be.
Let us keep on fightin',
Lets keep our country free."

I have a very short story in my port that I think you may like. "THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LITTLE BOY"

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
You been very busy. I put you in my FAV PLACES and look forward to reading your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great. I love your style maybe because I feel it is a lot like mine. I have never said that to anyone so coming from me you have yourself a fan. I was freezing my ass off as I was reading this you drew me in my friend.

Thanks again and I do look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Valkyrie  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy great read. I hope Val finds her red bearded man.

Beauty comes from deep within the eye of the beholder. Times change but a warm heart will always search. Enough of my foolish talk, you got a very cool style my man. I enjoy reading your words.

Geoff
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Review of Come and See  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nice job with this story. The pace made me take step for step with Judd on his way to damm nation. I like the style and your way with words.

General Patton knew the fate is the path way to glory and ones destiny. Most even when opportunity is kicking their door in they still do not have the sence to see who there.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
I happen to be a dreamer and the points you make seem well thought out and put into words with style. It took me many years to became a dreamers dreamer. I no longer have to wait for the sun to go down for the day dreams are even better.

I enjoyed this read very much and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of MY LITTLE GIRL  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
You did such a great job on this. As a father of two girls you put my life into words and did it with style.

My oldest in starting her 2nd year at NYU and I miss my Golden Angel lucky I live on Long Island so I see her alot.

Thanks again and I am looking forward to reading more of your work
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome home my man. "Their souls are forever lost in this jungle of hell and torment . Here to hunt the enemy for eternity" I hope their reward was better then that my man.

I have a story in my port
"THE LAST BODY BAG"

Go visit COUNTRY MOMS port you will dig it my man.

I will read more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very, Very well writen. This is a great first step to a story that I want to read. Your style is visual and the reader watches the story unfold within their minds eye.

"Trista's shocked amazement, it wasn't just her fiance' that walked out , but also the most horrible thing that she thought she'd ever see." How could anyone not turn the page.

You did the deal Kid, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Damm cowboy I got to take a cold shower.

Very well writen, the style in strong and the pace is a 2 minute lick.

I made my living for many years climbing on horse's back that still had the wild in their eyes.

I have a very short (367 words) in my port that I think you will like "CRITIQUE"

Thanks again for the heat my man I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very, very good job. I read the whole thing(that in itself is a great review) I read a lot don't like much. This is a good kitty a friend to the end. I like your way with words and the pace was perfect.

Thanks again and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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