love water, sea poems ,and the way you wrote the tenderness of the heart or love. how easy it can break and how one must hold one to another and the waves of emotion it rides, shows trust of one and the cumfort of protection from another.during hard times and good times that come.
that was cool,kinda funny sounds true,a little long but fun to read,some might lose interest,because most poems are short and unpredictable,i could see where it was going,reminds me of giving directions,might start out long but in the end its like short and simple,hope to see more,
nice very cool, i love the rain ,and yes it does take me away you know like a day dream ,i would only say dont use the word "and" so much try it without,
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