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Review of alone  
Review by T-Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very visual, as you say hugs are not permitted. It brings an emotion of sadness.


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Review of LIVING ON CRUMBS  
Review by T-Writer
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Beautiful and honest chicken soup for the soul.


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Review of The Battle  
Review by T-Writer
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Beautifully written, it is an open door to view Anxiety.


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Review by T-Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great information, thanks for sharing.


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Review of The Weary Mariner  
Review by T-Writer
Rated: E | (3.5)
I feel sad for this sailor, as he is married to the sea. His challenges of the sea

"against the mighty storms which blew their way and brought such monstrous seas and screeching winds."

This phrase is symbolic of the challenges which come within a marriage. Only his marriage is not with his family. He seems to recall his wife and children, however, that is not enough to keep him from returning to the sea. He lived and died a sea-man.

Very detailed, great work.


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Review by T-Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great storyline, and very captivating throughout. I would like to get to know Mark a little better so that I can feel compassion for him. Why is he typing in a dark room? Did he lose his job, and is now trying to conserve electricity? Or is he hiding from the enemy, who caught him spying on them while they ran tests for human androids?

Other then Marks dark hair and blue eyes there's not much else about him. Is he fit, does he work out, is he a nerd or a ladies man.

Also, the knocking, is it intense enough to vibrate the floors and walls, does the knocking become so intense that it rattles Mark's ears and his brain.

This story has the potential to become a screenplay. Keep on, keeping on.


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