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Review of Fart Torture  
Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like this, my only complaint being that it's a bit short... Though, I really can't complain about that since I'm sure it isn't easy to think of much to do for a madlib. I'd love to see a sequel to this or something like that at some point.
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Review of Anime GTS/Shrink  
Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Personally, I don't really have a problem with this. I even contributed to the story, and enjoyed reading through some of the stories others had written... I just encountered one problem that really rubbed me the wrong way...

Chapter 17: NO MORE CHOICES!

Look, I get why it was done, and I'm not going to say it ruins the story, but I do see some problems with that addition that I think could probably be easily fixed in some ways. For one, perhaps you could make it a rule that if people add the option of another anime, they'd need to legitimately add to it, deleting that option if they don't in a certain amount of time? Just an idea, and of course it's up to you.

The main reason this upset me was just simply because I haven't seen many of the anime listed as options, maybe about three or four of them, and wanted to add one I've seen and add to it as well.

But overall, that was the only issue I had with this, and it isn't one that ruins the whole thing. It's not a bad interactive by any means.
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Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I walk a lonely road,
The only one that I have ever known

Down this empty street,
On the Boulevard Of Broken Dreams

My shadow's the only one that walks beside me,
My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating
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Review of I love You  
Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I must say, I have always had a soft spot for poetry. But reading this I feel something... different. Truly amazing work.
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Review of character worlds  
Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: E | (2.5)
This is an creative concept. But an interesting one nun-the-least. I've never seen a poll like this, witch means it's truly unique.I loved answering it. Great work!
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Review by Total_Pokemon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I must say that I truly enjoyed answering this poll. It's not NEARLY as weird as MOST polls I answer, and it's a subject I've always wanted to see. I loved this poll, great work!
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