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Review by Tracy Bailey
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Thanks for sharing :)

You seem to know well what heartbreak consists of. Try to avoid use of numbers instead of words :)

And in the last stanza , what does Nae refer to? Is it a name ? If it is a word, please explain.

Thanks and keep it up!
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